23rd October

When i got in today i went straight to the library to get on with some development in my sketchbook, i had already got six outcomes and thought that i should just wait to the critique and develop them after i had received feed back. I spoke to Neil about them and he pointed out that on a couple of them there were some sketches witch looked a bit dodgy. This is the work i showed in the critique:

I main problems raised, were again what Neil brought up, this was very demoralizing as i spent ages tracing and then rendering them on illustrator although it was a fair point and following the critique it started annoying me more and i felt that that it was important to change. The general feedback in the critique was that i should change the drawings to silo-wets, also try to incorporate the rings throughout the set. All in all not the best critique i've had!

Although the critique was quite demoralizing i received large amounts of helpful feedback and there is a lot i Can get on with, the only annoying thing is that i got out the critique at five and i will need to show a set of six cards for tomorrow morning so i think it will be a late night!